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SecondThird go at Pee Review. I seriously considered the suggestions of the first pee review and the second and chopped, hacked, slashed, the long, unfunny bits into hopefully shorter, funnier pieces, as well as other improvements.
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Sayeth Gerry: shotgun!!
|Humour:||8.5||average of all sections
history never recovered:8
academia today: N/A
academia in fiction:9
|Concept:||9||brilliantly twisted concept, great execution|
|Prose and formatting:||8||only minor mistakes here and there, just one redlink. i'm not a huge fan of footnote-jokes, but yours work fairly well. good staggering of the images. maybe throw a __NOTOC__ on the top to hide the table of contents, sometimes they can just be annoying.|
|Images:||8||i like what you did with the images. if you decide to extend 'academia today', throw an image on there, of a nerd with a lab coat or something. maybe something similar for 'future of academia'.|
|Miscellaneous:||8.4||averaged. god, i hate this section.|
|Final Score:||41.9||your final score is a robust 41.9, placing it in the 'more than adequate, might be VFH' category. i would certainly support this for VFH, and would even go so far as to nominate it, once you make any changes you feel would be necessary. excellent work, this. as always, feel free to pick up the Gerryphone at any time.|
|Reviewer:||-- 18:36, 15 December 2007 (UTC)|