Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/A Victorian Gentleman's Guide to the Trivialities of Courtship

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Please, If you have any constructive critisism, tips or insults I would appreciate you expressing them to me, through the medium of language.--CrabPope 23:22, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

edit A Victorian Gentleman's Guide to the Trivialities of Courtship

CrabPope 23:22, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

Flyby Try to cut down on the white space and add links. Also, I would suggest more images, the last one is sorta random. As for the language, it sounds close enough to me, but I speak Northern Appalachian. I'd suggest getting the opinion of a real English person (preferably an educated one) on the language, people tend to pickier about that which they are familiar with. --Mnb'z 05:19, 19 March 2009 (UTC)

I am a real English person! And I am (poorly) educated. The dialog is sort of meant to be incongruous to the setting, hence the references to Directory Enquiries, Films, High Fives, Marijuana etc.--CrabPope 10:02, 19 March 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 1 shit
Concept: 1 shit
Prose and formatting: 1 shit
Images: 1 shit
Miscellaneous: 1 shit
Final Score: 5 I hate this article, HATE HATE HAT
Reviewer: --CrabPope 12:29, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
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