Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/100 reasons to ban Lyrithya

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edit 100 reasons to ban Lyrithya

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I'll do it. Will be my first pee review. --Purple mini lolly Lollipop Purple mini lolly - CONTRIBS - WRITINGS - SHOP - Now adopting! 03:01, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

YAY Snowflake Frosty the snowman 03:03, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
Humour: 9 I think it is a laughable article, you wrote it pretty well. I like how you made the 2nd point bring all the elements of previous points.
Concept: 10 I once attempted to wrtie something similar to this, as a n00b. Lyrithya is an easy concept. Good work.
Prose and formatting: 6 A lot of it is in-jokey suff, so a lot of people might not understand it. But that is far from your control.
Images: 8 I thought they were fairly good pictures, including the 49 huffs one; it shows you are good with picking images.
Miscellaneous: 8.3 N/A
Final Score: 41.3 As this is one of the best by you (I haven't read that many Frosty articles), you should start to write more Top 100 lists. I also reccommend to take this out of namespace, it won't get huffed; and Lyrithya can't huff it anymore. And with that, I finish my first pee review.
Reviewer: --Purple mini lolly Lollipop Purple mini lolly - CONTRIBS - WRITINGS - SHOP - Now adopting! 23:54, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
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