UnScripts talk:Grass in the Mist II

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Just 'cause I'm so nice, I'm gonna make you a nice picture for this page (the old image with a 2 on it). :D - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 21:19, Dec 8

Heey, awesome! And that sounds like it'll be quite an artistic effort as well...quite emotionally draining...I'll mainspace it for now, and you can add the image whenever it's made. Thanks! :) --THE 21:24, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
Any preferences for the color? I was thinking a hot pink, and I think a Roman Numeral "II" looks classy, how about you? - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 21:30, Dec 8
Yeah, you can be the judge of color and font. A roman numeral II sounds good though, as a matter of fact, I think I might have to rename the article "Grass in the Mist II" at some point... --THE 21:35, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
You can always redirect it. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 21:36, Dec 8
Good idea. Done. Now that old conversation will look totally insane, but whatever. Now let's just hope I don't decide to switch it to "Grass in the Mist Two" or I'll be moving this page around all day.... --THE 21:43, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
I'm likin' the pic! :) --THE 21:44, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
Cool, glad to be of service. :D MS Paint 4 Life! - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 21:47, Dec 8

edit From Pee Review

Well, I never thought I'd write a sequel to Grass in the Mist, but then this idea came along and I thought "What the hell. I'll go for it." As the author, I can't judge it very well. The only thing I know for sure is that it's longer and more preposterous. Other than that, I've no idea. I'd really appreciate an in-depth review. What are the weakest points? Should I shorten it? How does it compare to the first one? Is it...any good? --THE 00:30, 5 December 2007 (UTC)

Grass in the Mist II
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Your Source for Fine Scented Pee
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Grass in the mist? Uh oh, I have some extra reading to do...   Le Cejak <-> (Dec 8 / 16:20)

Let me just say: How did the original hilarious article pass me by??? ...holy crap that's funny. Okay, begin review!   Le Cejak <-> (Dec 8 / 18:12)
Humour: 8.8 avg of each section
  • Scene One [9]

Your writing style is pretty similar to mine, I think. We're both kinda "out there" if you know what I mean. I didn't give you a 10 because this isn't exactly an addition to GitM, it could be a sequel to any documentary, really.

  • Scene Two [9]

Yes, again though it could be a sequel to anything really.

  • Scene Three [10]


  • Scene Four [8]

Still lots of lols, but... are you sniffing glue? I ask because, uh... (too random to be perfect)

  • Scene Five [8]

Are you snorting ajax? Zippy's cooler than Spiffy, but, still something is lost in the translation from THE to human.

  • Scene Six [9]

Are you licking waterbuffalo? By the way, this isn't Africa, is it?

  • Scene Seven [8]

uuuuuuhhhhhhhhhh... I thought I was good at reviewing but I don't know what to say

  • Scene Eight [9]

Nice ending. Obviously that moron didn't have any possessions!

Concept: 8 A winner, but it is still a sequel. You are a very good writer.
Prose and formatting: 9 Good formatting.
Images: 0 *OOF!* duh, no pictures!
Miscellaneous: 6.5 avg
Final Score: 32.3 Throw it on mainspace, it's ready. That was fun to read, although it was extremely long. It would be okay to get rid of one of those scenes. I think the weakest scene was maybe the fourth one... I'm not sure what else to say! Go ahead and bother me if you want a rereview
Reviewer:   Le Cejak <-> (Dec 8 / 21:04)
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