UnScripts talk:Diary of A Cyber Sex N00b

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Try to improve the narrative parts (longer sentences without line breaks) and make this article less listy. Pictures are also a must-have. -- herr doktor needsApistol Rocket [scream!] 00:33, 18 May 2007 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

edit UnScripts:Diary of A Cyber Sex N00b

First draft, still thinking of an ending. Any reccomendations? The preceding unsigned comment was added by Spatz (talk • contribs)

Humour: 7 Funny. Very much like what I have seen in countless chats.
Concept: 7 The idea has potential. Something that many people have seen unfold
Prose and formatting: 5 Often hard to read. Try bolding the names so as to help with reading ease. Also, the title should be a banner on top of the page. Now that's classy.
Images: 3 As I just said, try making a banner instead of the side image.
Miscellaneous: 10 N/A
Final Score: 32 Sorry about the crappy formatting of this. It's my first pee review. I'll come back to fix it.
Reviewer: Blixinator (I haven't set up a sig yet)
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