UnScripts talk:Alcoholic: The Untold Story

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I'd really like this to be featured. There are some really funny parts but I'd like it if someone read it and see what bits should be changed. Any sort of help will be good as gold. Wahoo 08:07, 15 March 2006 (UTC)

I'd suggest making it fewer lists and more action. Also, a less passive tone would help a lot. :]--KATIE!! 09:59, 21 March 2006 (UTC)
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