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that do not rhyme; |
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to god we ''send a mental message''. |
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Latest revision as of 03:49, January 16, 2012
- I detest poems,
that do not rhyme;
Without a doubt,
a waste of chronologicalness.
- Those who write them,
those little jerks;
on their faces,
stay dirty devious expressions.
- They see their poems,
as something good;
But I'd trash them,
If just I was able to
- Lovely poems rhyme,
they're filled with zest;
unlike the waste,
unlike the the poems that do have zest.
- You see, good poems,
take time to write.
Take us places,
And out of peripheral vision.
- But if you write,
your poem too fast;
The thing you seek,
Can never continuously work.
- My meter´s perfect,
from year to day,
and in my stead,
to god we send a mental message.
This is a picture of a guy wearing a shirt. - His wife, she knows it,
and so do I.
It's so sad that
it makes me weep about for ever.
- It is my hope,
this bids you good;
and that my poem,
is simply getting across to you.
- And I must now,
bid you adieu;
with high regards,
from me to those who are still reading.
