||All good, Craig Brown-esque. I just think Gordon Brown should sound scottish
||Content is similar to the article it is spoofing, so that's good. Maybe more statistics.
|Prose and formatting:
||This is fine minus Gordon's accent.
||Minor qualm: Top image would be better on right, and bottom image on left. Then change the second one's caption. i sound anal.
||List of reactions at the end is fabulous. Just maybe add one about dressing Pedophiles as morris dancers, so children can hear them coming and as an added benefit, Morris dancers will be beaten up by misguided vigilantes.
||Loved it, and have already inundated you with constructive criticism so I'll shut up.
||--Darwin of suburbia 16:08, 20 August 2007 (UTC)