UnNews talk:Old Faithful quits

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This article could benefit from losing all UnNews references. It's rather clumsily worded, and the connection between the film and the "bulge" is not well or adequately explained. Sorry, I think this one is a dud. Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 21:26, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Zim, you're right. It took a major rewrite to fix, and I hope it's OK now. I think the headline should be "Yellowstone's Old Faithful quits". BTW: Now I know how you want the headlines. I went back and corrected a bunch of the recent ones. What now? It's your call? Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 22:33, Mar 11
Tell you what, Funnybony; put some more links in and I'll publish it. It's not great, but I can't fault you for lack of trying. Not up to lead story, though. Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 00:11, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
Hi Zim, wow, I did a lot of work on this article User talk:Funnybony/Old Faithful On Strike, and I think it's just as good now as any others. I don't know how to change the TITLE, but I would prefer the title: Old Faithful quits. I dated it March 13, 2010 at the bottom, so it would be good to publish it tomorrow. Never mind feature. If it gets published some people will get a laugh, cause I did. Could you please publish this on the 13th, or tell me what to do? Thanks! Also, a blimp-sized hint well taken, so I'll cut way back. Too bad though. I told my 13 year old son UnNews wants me to stop. He said, "but how can you stop ideas?" So I told him an ancient Sanskrit verse, which translated says, "Alas! The creator forgot to impart perfume to gold; fruit to the sugarcane; flowers to the sandalwood tree; wealth to the learned; long life to the king; and non-envy in a listener?" --- Chanakya Niti Shastra. No sweat! Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 13:05, Mar 12
Nice fixes, gentlemen. This article is now judged by me sufficient as a lead story. Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 01:34, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
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