UnNews talk:National Geographic Rediscovers Target Audience

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So I just wrote this thing, but I'm not really wiki formatting savvy. I think it reads alright, but if someone would like to tinker with the formatting to pretty it up a bit I'd be pleased! --Benny Goodman 05:41, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

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Ok, so this is my first UNnews article, and I would be thankful if people give give me their two cents on how I did, weither it's in the right mock news vain or not, etc. thanks --Benny Goodman 05:54, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

Yup, you've got the idea. Could be a little more to it but for unnews it's probably ok. --Kelpan 21:18, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Pretty funny idea. Perhaps needs a few more short jokes.
Concept: 10 Excellent concept. It's almost factual (except funny).
Prose and formatting: 9 I removed "For CBC News in Toronto, this is Liam Gallagher reporting." because I thought it didn't look right. The rest of the prose/formatting is pretty good.
Images: 6 I found the image slightly odd and it took me a while to get it.
Miscellaneous: 9 Like I said before. Just needs more/better images and a few more jokes.
Final Score: 42 Good. Just needs a little work. (Could do with being longer too)
Reviewer: An Ape that Only Exists on Thursdays 20:21, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
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