UnNews talk:Jolie to paint rainbow family

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....This article needs some care--Safteysalamander 22:47, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

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edit UnNews:Jolie to paint rainbow family

Greetings! I have come with bad tidings. A.K.A. This article. Anything from anyone would be appreciated. {Ikabu}BUZZ...FLICK...GURGLE... 11:26, 21 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 4 Can't honestly say I laughed, even to myself. Random gay jokes do not a good article make.
Concept: 3 Jolie adoption jokes are the new Bill Clinton blowjob jokes.
Prose and formatting: 4 Not very newslike.
Images: 3 It's possible to make untouched images funny with well-written captions, but in this case the captions aren't funny.
Miscellaneous: 5 Manages to keep total retardation to a minimum
Final Score: 19 There's probably nothing that can make this article better since the concept is terrible to begin with. You've got some work to do as a writer, but keep trying.
Reviewer: -- Tinymooose.gif » Sir Savethemooses Grand Commanding Officer ... holla atcha boy» 16:31, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
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