UnNews talk:French tornadoes devastate US

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Finally got around to writing another UnNews, wondering if it's up to par for another VFH. I was browsing through the latest headlines on my Google Toolbar, and spotted news on the French Elections closing and another article called "Fresh Tornadoes pound Central US". One quick word change in the title, and the two stories were merged with hilarious consequences. Review appropriately, keep in mind I only have MS Paint for images. --Littleboyonly TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK Oldmanonly 22:52, 6 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 I laughed, not terribly hard, but I did. My favorite was the pulp fiction reference by far.
Concept: 9 Ridiculous. However, a funny connection.
Prose and formatting: 7 Really nothing bad or great here.
Images: 9 Especially for MS Paint, I wonder how you did the moustaches. Royal looks great too.
Miscellaneous: 8 This article generally deserves an eight.
Final Score: 40 I like this, short and sweet, and funny for sure. I think its beyond improvement however, as some concepts can be stretched too thin.
Reviewer: LeatherboundbooksTalkContributions 22:40, 7 May 2007 (UTC)

Fixed the link, review now =D --Littleboyonly TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK Oldmanonly 20:44, 7 May 2007 (UTC)

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