UnNews talk:Fed up fish fight ferociously

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Humour: 4 I'm sorry but I didn't find it very funny. The 'sex with fish' jokes were weak and overused. You need to insert some good lines. Try to vary it. A bestiality joke or two is alright but you need something else. I have no idea what that might be as I feel the idea is limiting.
Concept: 5 Like I said, the concept seems to have limited scope for humour. Perhaps if you could make it more ridiculous (perhaps like a war between the fish and the locals).
Prose and formatting: 8 No complaints.
Images: 5 Again, the sex with fish jokes were weak and overused (which is all the pics were).
Miscellaneous: 6 The title made me laugh.
Final Score: 28 To be honest, I think it needs a total reworking of the concept or some massive improvement of the current one.
Reviewer: -- folksy Ape (fumble) (Riot Porn) 20:49, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
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