| Humour:
| 4
| I'm sorry but I didn't find it very funny. The 'sex with fish' jokes were weak and overused. You need to insert some good lines. Try to vary it. A bestiality joke or two is alright but you need something else. I have no idea what that might be as I feel the idea is limiting.
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| Concept:
| 5
| Like I said, the concept seems to have limited scope for humour. Perhaps if you could make it more ridiculous (perhaps like a war between the fish and the locals).
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| Prose and formatting:
| 8
| No complaints.
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| Images:
| 5
| Again, the sex with fish jokes were weak and overused (which is all the pics were).
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| Miscellaneous:
| 6
| The title made me laugh.
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| Final Score:
| 28
| To be honest, I think it needs a total reworking of the concept or some massive improvement of the current one.
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| Reviewer:
| -- vulgar Ape (pasteurize) (Riot Porn) 20:49, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
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