edit From Pee Review
Actually, my first attempt at UnNews. -- herr doktor needsAbeam [scream!] 19:52, 18 February 2007 (UTC)
||Pretty standard humor, it gets the job done...I didn't break out in laughter, but it definately belongs in un-news
||A minor but fascinating story, but great concept
|Prose and formatting:
||Got a little sloppy at the end, but I like it!
||Not much besides the "dragon", but its enough.
||B - Yeah, I was wondering about this story..
||—The preceding unsigned comment was added by Happy Weasel (talk • contribs)