UnBooks talk:The Von Stauberg Institute for Extreme Cardiac Stress Tests

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edit From Pee Review

So, new piece, curious to get some remarks. Thanks. ~Jewriken.GIF 23:09, 18 March 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 I liked it. It had the ability to be better, but overall it was good.
Concept: 8 It was something original. I don't really see scripts on Uncyc.
Prose and formatting: 6 Maybe some more parenthesis and italicizing for descriptions and actions should be in order so it can look more script-ish.
Images: 9 You've got quite a few.
Miscellaneous: 9 As I said above, It's a script, and you rarely see something like that on Uncyclopdia(only 2 that I know of exist here not including this).
Final Score: 39 You could move it to UnScripts if you want since its written in a scriptish style. I like it, but It isn't anything that would probably would survive on VFH IMO.
Reviewer: --~ Tophatsig 01:16, 19 March 2007 (UTC)
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