UnBooks talk:No Clean Way to Die

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Did you spell "prequel" wrong on purpose? just thought I'd let you know it's not right. P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 22:37, 20 May 2007 (UTC)

This is rather good. Very poignant. I'm glad I'm not a bar of soap. --Strange (but) Untrue  Whhhy?Whut?How? *Back from the dead* 10:23, 21 May 2007 (UTC) When it comes to spelling, I am indeed retarted, yet thanks for calling it good. Yea, I just looked at my soap one day and thought, man what a hard life these guys have gotta have.Spatz 21:06, 21 May 2007 (UTC)

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I have not even halfway finished this. I plan to add ALOT more. This is just the basic storyline. What do you think of it so far???? Spatz 18:01, 20 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 9.9999 fuckin hilarious
Concept: 9.9999 cool
Prose and formatting: 9.9999 nice form
Images: 9.9999 v.g.
Miscellaneous: 9.9999 Miscellaneous comment
Final Score: 49.9995 Funny....but whats alot?
Reviewer: User:Hawthorn Peebles/sig 20:03, 20 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 4 Well, I've seen worse. You did the best you could with the concept.
Concept: 2 Unfortunately, the concept sucked. How old are you? If the answer is 12 or lower, I forgive you. It looks like a piece of sixth grade anthropomorphism with some lame dirty jokes thrown in.
Prose and formatting: 6 Readable. I couldn't quite steel myself to go through it carefully, but there weren't any glaring errors, and it flowed okay.
Images: 4 Not bad, not good.
Miscellaneous: 4 Meh
Final Score: 20 Basically, not a good article. Earlier, I rhetorically asked if you were 12; I've since checked your user page and I see you're 15. If this is the case, then this work is beneath you. Try harder next time.
Reviewer: --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 10:44, 22 May 2007 (UTC)
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