UnBooks talk:My New Life as a T-Rex

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Uh, I don't think we've met, Mr. Hilarious. :D   Le Cejak <3:05, 31 May 2008>

GODDAMMIT WAIT UNTIL ITS FINISHED! And thanks, maybe you'll review it when it's done? ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF @ 13:01 May 31

I may be T-Rex, but I not a gay T-Rex. Beautiful. -OptyC Sucks! Icons-flag-us CUN17:04, 31 May

Go T. rex! -Sockpuppet of an unregistered user 00:26, 8 February 2009 (UTC)

Holy cow; I've been away from Uncyc for a LONG time and this is the funniest thing I've seen since I started checking back every now and then. --The Acceptable Thinking cap small Cainad Sacred Chao (Fnord) 16:18, 8 February 2009 (UTC)

My word, this is brilliant. --Nikau 10:37, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Jeez. This is great. Really. PoliszSir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj KUN 12:43, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

edit Review #1 by Optimuschris

Humour: 7 I hate this part, so let's get it over with first. It's funny, no doubt. I think it's ready for mainspace right now. The mental image of a sad-sack T-Rex kills me. I think the title's fine as well; I can't think of anthing better anyway. When the narrator ate the girl he was flirting with I genuinely LOL'ed but...that was the only time. The rest of the article only managed to illicit grins and nods. The tone is right and I enjoyed the read but it just didn't make me laugh like some other things I've read. So, to recap. Funny. Not that funny. I LOVE YOU MAN!
Concept: 9 I love the concept. It kinda seems like Uncyc's version of "The Metamorphosis". It's weird and original and full of dinosaur. Neato. Ummm. I guess I really got nothing else to add here so I think I'll fill out the section with random discussion of the weather. It's cloudy and chilly here and THIS IS A VERY GOOD CONCEPT.
Prose and formatting: 9 Another nine! You must have done this before because besides a couple minor spelling mistakes (that I'll be damned if I'm gonna go back and find again to fix) I saw nothing that should be corrected. The prose is also spot on. If anything, I'd say maybe find a way to make the main character seem even more pathetic, but it's great how it is.
Images: 7 The pictures are fine, nothing really exciting but perfectly suitable. The caption on the last one gave me a chuckle. I'd give you some suggestions for better images but finding good images is really hard for me and I got nothing. A high heel caught in the teeth of the T-Rex maybe? I dunno.
Miscellaneous: 8 Averaged, but you're an above average dude! Did I mention I love you? It's a good article, but is it VFH worthy? Tough call. I'd vote for it if that means anything, but I have a feeling it might fall a little short. Mainspace it and I'll run it up the flagpole for you.
Final Score: 40 Hey look, 40! That's not too shabby kid!
Reviewer: OptyC Sucks! Icons-flag-us CUN13:34, 2 Jun


edit Review #2, by Cajek

Humour: 8.8 no, you didn't edit conflict me, neener neener
  • intro -9- (from I awoke to "Why," I thought, "did I ever decide to become a T-Rex?") First of all: OMG this was funny. You got the description just right, along with what it might actually be like to be a t-rex. I don't think I would add anything else. I guess the reason I'm not giving you a 10 is because it is just a t-rex joke, funneh as it is.
  • beg -8- (from I guess I first realized to But this wasn't the only reason I avoided leaving my apartment.) Yes, very good. The shock of being a guy turned into a t-rex has worn off by this point, but it's still above average, with the guy being turned into a t-rex after being bonked on the head (lol).
  • mid -8- (from It was August. to ...dewy scent in my lizard nostrils.) Excellent prose here, plus above average humor.
  • end -10- (from Then I ate her. to end) Then the t-rex ate her... then you tried keeping a blog... then you played the french horn... transsexuals
Concept: 9 This is a great article. One of the most imaginative I have ever read.
Prose and formatting: 9 Good prose, excellent.
Literecy-cat
Images: 8 The only one I didn't get was the band one. Maybe I'm missing something? I never give high scores on images, but you did better than okay.
Miscellaneous: 8.7 avg
Final Score: 43.5 I'm gonna nom this.
Reviewer:   Le Cejak <16:08, 02 Jun 2008>
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