UnBooks talk:Mr Happy's Bible Primer

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AMEN! -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 21:36, 23 November 2006 (UTC)

I love it! But then I've always wanted to kill that smug old bastard Mr Happy. --Strange (but) Untrue  Whhhy?Whut?How? *Back from the dead* 01:17, 5 February 2007 (UTC)

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At the time, I thought that putting a Mr Man in a biblical setting, and getting them smote was a recipe for comedy gold. Now that it's been implemented, I think it needs a little help. Ta. --no, yuo Tanks-12px chat 08:52, 9 November 2006 (UTC)

I like the drawings. Very to the point and child-like. Also, the simplistic content and short sentences are very much like I'd imagine a 3-year old would be spoken to. In short, right on target. Just check the spelings ("toruble"). I'd fix it myself but I'm just too lazy. Anyway, the absense of a missus Sad actually begetting the children is brilliant. Keep it that way. Perhaps increase the number of children in the drawings to a dozen or so (or just three in the "AND MR SAD HAD NOT BEGAT CHILDREN.", then a dozen in "AND HIS GOD PROVIDED A MIRACLE. AND MR SAD BEGAT CHILDREN." ...By the way, the use of ALL CAPITALS in the tekst is also very good. Also, I think blue is not exactly the correct colour for the god-figure. Gold is out since mr Sad is yellow, too little contrast there. Perhaps eye-hurting pink, neon-green or regal purple with a silver beard ? Just thinking out loud. Oh, and perhaps after the "pillar of salt" you could continue with the story of the Deluge, Noah's Ark and explain why the sea tastes of salt... -- di Mario 22:31, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
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