UnBooks talk:Fischer Price

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edit Pee Review

Humour: 7.5 You put a lot of effort into it, and it's pretty funny at a lot of parts but some of the jokes are a little ... esoteric.
Concept: 6 I've got no idea where you got the ideas for this...obviously there's no mention of "go eat shit fuckers"...was that the joke of it? It's good, but I'm confused.
Prose and formatting: 10 Wow...you made the English language your playground! In a good way of course.
Images: 5 MEH. I mean, you have images, which is good. But they don't really stand out. some of them are kind of bland. With a couple more really funny ones you'll be good.
Miscellaneous: 9 I like it...I really don't know what I'm supposed to put here but the little random weird things are awesome...
Final Score: 37.5 It's a good article with great potential. It just needs that extra oomph to make it stand out more and a couple more funny images.
Reviewer: Heck no techno 00:43, 16 November 2007 (UTC)


edit Hmm...

Tres amusant, but I wonder... What have we come to when we are making parodies of our own in-jokes?

--Vana 23:29, 4 December 2007 (UTC)

edit Oh, Lj

You are a stone cold genius. I mean it! This was hilarious. Come back to us! Necropaxx (T) {~} Thursday, 02:00, Apr 1 2010 Yeah this way too funny!!!! DJ Mixerr 19:43, January 1, 2012 (UTC) DJMIXERR (talk)(contributions)

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