UnBooks talk:Encyclopedia of Machete Battles

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Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Encyclopedia of Machete Battles27Serq Fetconcept: 310/3Add some hilarious machete battles. Sounds easy, right? Also, he put the concept grade in the miscellaneous. Very specific suggestions, so I'd like another opinion.
Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Encyclopedia of Machete Battles41.4GerryCheevershumor/concept: 710/15
avg = 34.2 lowest = 5

Humour: 4 Some good parts
Concept: 3 This book seems to be about a history of machete battles. Might I recomend having some accounts of Machete battles? And the Vietnam Vet seems a little too over the top. Don't capitalize so many things
Prose and formatting: 6 Capitilizations out of place.
Images: 6 Sufficiant. I think you should take out the pillows and the gnome. The alternating rabbit/monkey ones are good, although maybe you should keep them as seperate images
Miscellaneous: 8 Good concept
Final Score: 27 Keep: Intro, History, part of 'best places,' conclusion

Delete: What's it like, part of 'best places,' make the 'Vet' parts have less drama
Add: History of battles
It's a good idea, but it has some work to do. It was pretty good in some parts, but it does need some clean-up.

Reviewer: Fresh Stain Serq Fet of Pokemon (At your service) 05:10, 3 October 2007 (UTC)

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