Talk:XBible 360

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Fucking hilarious as hell.

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It has its moments, but I think it needs something more... What would make this article better? I know a picture of the console would be great, but I lack skills in Fireworks... Your help to make this a better article is appreciated. I think it needs a bit more length in each section, as the largest I think I've written is one paragraph in each section, and a bit more ingenuity. I know its missing something, but I just can't put my finger on it...--Jocke Pirat 22:58, 17 April 2006 (UTC)

I'd put the first mention of the Product in bold, move it to "XBible 360" (w capitalization) add some categories and expand the criticizm section. Lenin & McCarthy 10:06, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
Someone expanded the criticizm section. I'll add some categories. Lenin & McCarthy 06:43, 20 April 2006 (UTC)
Yeah, I expanded them. Many thanks for the edits.--Jocke Pirat 22:38, 20 April 2006 (UTC)
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