Talk:Worst 100 Pick-Up Lines of All Time
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I wanna know 20-10. Hank J. Wimbleton
Taken from the Pee Review:
| Humo(u)r:
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| The list items were sometimes hit and miss, but overall kept me laughing most of the time. The opening paragraph is really too random to be funny, though. Read UN:HTBFANJS for ideas. Remember, satire is funniest when close to the truth.
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| Concept:
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| Not very original, but OK
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| Prose and Formatting:
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| Very listy. But there's really nothing you could do to fill it out beyond what you've done. I'd recommend a paragraph or two thrown in at a couple more spots, like the end. These can help your list be less of a, well, list. A few weird senteces, nothing too bad.
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| Images:
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| Not nearly enough images, but the one you have is good. I highly recommend UN:PIC
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| Miscellaneous:
| 9
| I liked the article. A solid list.
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| Final Score:
| 37
| A lot of the people on the site see the word list and go HOLY CRAP DELETE IT NOW!! However, check out Uncyclopedia:Writing lists for tips on how to make your list (which I found very funny, BTW) among the best.
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OHHH!!! One month later and it goes up 13 points! I knew that Batman picture would help greatly! Hahaha! I still would appreciate some help. That extra 13 points was mostly because of my work. I'll look for some more pictures later. I plan on putting this on VFH once I get some more pictures. I really think this could get featured with a little bit more work. --Dexter111344 00:15, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
It's got a shot for VFH, if you keep at it. Get a friend to read it over and tell you what's good and what is unnecessary.(If you don't have a friend, take one of mine, they're all annoying) Good Luck! P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon 
(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 03:22, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Needs more "I don't like sand" and "Are you an angel"
seriously there worse then everything that is on the list. --Deuxhero 18:06, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
- There is a difference between bad funny and just plain stupid. Those are just plain stupid. Well, we do have the angel line already... If you'd actually read the list you'd know that... --Dexter111344 00:15, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
[edit] From Pee Review 2
I put this on here about a month ago. It only got a 24. I got rid of some of the pick-up lines I didn't find funny, fixed most of the grammar amd formatting problems, changed some other lines, ect. I even added a picture! Too bad it is the only picture I could find that fit. Other picture recommendations are welcome. Thank you for reviewing this in advance! For the previous review, check the articles talk page. --Dexter111344 20:13, 29 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humo(u)r:
| 9
| The list items were sometimes hit and miss, but overall kept me laughing most of the time. The opening paragraph is really too random to be funny, though. Read UN:HTBFANJS for ideas. Remember, satire is funniest when close to the truth.
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| Concept:
| 7
| Not very original, but OK
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| Prose and Formatting:
| 7
| Very listy. But there's really nothing you could do to fill it out beyond what you've done. I'd recommend a paragraph or two thrown in at a couple more spots, like the end. These can help your list be less of a, well, list. A few weird senteces, nothing too bad.
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| Images:
| 5
| Not nearly enough images, but the one you have is good. I highly recommend UN:PIC
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| Miscellaneous:
| 9
| I liked the article. A solid list.
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| Final Score:
| 37
| A lot of the people on the site see the word list and go HOLY CRAP DELETE IT NOW!! However, check out Uncyclopedia:Writing lists for tips on how to make your list (which I found very funny, BTW) among the best.
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(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 03:22, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
