Talk:World domination

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Humour: 10 I thought it was pretty good, if a bit of a random
Concept: 8 I'm sorry, the concept is pretty coherent, but I'm not liking the shallow background the article comes from. Relying way too much on Stewie Griffin.
Prose and formatting: 12 It's good formatting, nothing particularly awesomely sweet.
Images: 13 Images are fine and fitting. It could use more variety though...
Miscellaneous: 7 Dinosaurs? The links didn't really help the article, but who cares about Misc. stuff that much
Final Score: 50 It's an article that could be ferry ferry good, but the overreliance on Stewie Griffin is a bit bland. Spice it up a bit and poke around a bit on world domination. Watch some other tv shows, check out Pinky and the Brain. Just flatly. More stuff mate, and your articles gold.
Reviewer: --Witt, Union leader of Union member UNion Entertain me* 05:58, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
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