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Revision as of 03:06, November 9, 2008 by MrN9000
|This article was nominated for deletion on November 5, 2008.
The result of the discussion was Keep.
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|Humour:||7||I enjoyed the twist on a real company and real people. It's very cleverly written. However, some of the later sections could be expanded; I feel like there's more humor that can be used in there.|
|Concept:||8||It's a clever idea with potential, and it's pretty original.|
|Prose and formatting:||4||You have an absolutely atrocious amount of Red Links in this article. Fix it!|
|Images:||2||You have one image, and it doesn't work. Add some images, they're out there, I know they are! An image of the logo, especially, would be good.|
|Miscellaneous:||7||I enjoy how you based this article in fact and simply twisted the facts to fit a world of canines.|
|Final Score:||28||The writing is very good, and this article has a lot of potential. However, there needs to be pictures; perhaps not of "nude dogs", but perhaps of Huffner, the logo, a joke cover, etc. You know what I mean; pictures that fit the humor of the article. Also, get rid of the red links; they're a huge distraction.|
|Reviewer:||Judgement 15:30, 17 February 2007 (UTC)|