Since I absolutely love this page, I will pee review it. Since I've only reviewed a few pages, and I might be mildly generous with my scores, you should probally get a second opinion to even it out.
|Humour:||8.5||I love Uncyclopedia in-jokes, and this is an interesting new spin.|
|Concept:||9||As per above. Also, the link between Oscar Wilde and potatoes based on the Irish Potato Famine would have never occured to me.|
|Prose and formatting:||7||It seems to have too many parentheses. I suggest creating a footnotes section at the bottom. The Did You Know? section and the link to the Captain Obvious cereal may need to be cleaned up a little.|
|Images:||8.5||The image of the box is great! You also made it yourself, so cudos for that.|
|Miscellaneous:||9.5||You'd think Uncyclopedia would have learned their lesson the first time when they released that flop movie. Now they actually want to make a cereal?|
|Final Score:||42.5||Go out and buy a box today!|
|Reviewer:||-- Kip > Talk • Works • • 07:38, 28 September 2007 (UTC)|