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this has potential, but needs serious work done on it...

Maybe put it on Pee Review. --—Braydie 16:03, 9 December 2006 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

Humour: 5 Maybe it's just because I don't like toilet/sex humour, but I found the jokes kind of stupid.
Concept: 8 Concept was good. I especially liked the Star Trek virginity bit.
Prose and formatting: 5 Not always good grammar. Found it slightly hard to read.
Images: 3 Images were poorly drawn. Sorry.
Miscellaneous: 7 Good concept. Needs to be clevered up a bit. Might appeal to 12 year old as it is.
Final Score: 28
Reviewer: An Ape that Only Exists on Thursdays 20:27, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

Is that 5 "out of twenty"s for 28 out of 100? Because that seems a bit high... Human 00:07, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

I tried. Well, kind of. Okay, not really. All right, I just pissed and moaned a bit and otherwise did jack shit. Sorry. Clemens177 20:23, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

Fixed Tak'ta 16:23, 12 November 2009 (UTC)

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