Talk:Thumb twiddling

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Look at this awesome review the article got:

Humour: 4 It had a few wry references, sure, but I didn't really find it funny. I think you could talk more about it as a serious martial art, and take a more exaggerated "being serious of something silly" stance.
Concept: 5 I don't think it provides you with much material to work with, but you've got an angle. I say you play it up more.
Prose and formatting: 4 Well written, but extremely short. Could you add more to current sections? Maybe a "health benefits" section? Rules of official thumb twiddling? Describe more about thumb twiddling? Just like a girlfriend, don't be afraid to give it more meat.
Images: 4 They are pictures of thumbs. Can you add, perhaps, pictures of famous martial artist's thumbs?
Miscellaneous: 3 Sorry man, but I felt I had to ding you somewhere for relying on lists/quotes/references to famous people as a humor tool.
Final Score: 20 Not bad, but not really good either. Give it another read through, tone it up a bit, I think we'll both be really pleased with the results.
Reviewer: --Mejwell 20:30, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

--Kpmartin18 21:37, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

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