Talk:The Sand Hermit

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Hey, just wrote this article under my user domain, see what you think of it. Tell me what to add, what to remove, what to change-- don't hold back on your comments --The Llama Llover!!! 05:14, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 The idea of a derranged obsessive hermit is hysterical, however the article needs some more expansion. You could add some sections on his strange affinity for sand, and his crab like behaviour (He only walks sideways and lives in a burrow.)
Concept: 7 A good idea, that needs a little more work, possibly a section on how he ended up as a hermit, with descriptions of his increasingly odd behaviour.
Prose and formatting: 9 No problems here.
Images: 7 images complement the text well.
Miscellaneous: 7.5 Would benift from a little bit more of this.
Final Score: 37.5 Overall a good idea that only needs more work.
Reviewer: --Winstanley1 13:41, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
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