Talk:The Obese Man's Handbook

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Humour: 7.9513 Though it's funny this articles a bit too relentlessly savage and negative. There needs to be a slightly more subtle build up to each Joke, as if a real fat person had written it and was inadvertantly revaling their insecurity, emptyness and pathetic greed.
Concept: 7 I like the idea, it just needs a little more expansion to fulfil it's potential.
Prose and formatting: 6 Well written just needs to be refined a little.
Images: 5 Needs a few more images maybe some examples of different types of obese people.
Miscellaneous: 7 No idea what this sections for.
Final Score: 32.9513 Overall it's a good start just needs a little more work and some slight expansion.
Reviewer: Winstanley1 13:53, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
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