Talk:The Life and Times of a Cute Little Puppy

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I wrote this article a while ago and now it feels a little off. Any help is appreciated! --Greenvegetable 23:25, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 5 Therer are some pretty funny lines in this article the problem is they are too few and far between I'd say to read other articles and UNBook articles to get motivated.
Concept: 7 The concept is a great idea though you should rename this article Memiors of a Cute little puppy or something.
Prose and formatting: 3 It just seems so short and jumpy at every turn like a cute little puppy.
Images: 5 Okay, but you can do better.
Miscellaneous: 2 Brothers and sisters traded off into slavery while she was playing fetch...priceless.
Final Score: 22 Has potential, though major, major work needs to be done first! And I mean major get someobody to help you.
Reviewer: --Dr. Fenwick 17:40, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Thank you, good doctor. I'll get to work. --Greenvegetable 19:37, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Dalmation Do you want to use this image? Just found it on the web for one of my articles but I think it's a very Cute Little Puppy--Kelpan 20:59, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Nah, can't use it. Thnaks though.--Dr. Fenwick 00:07, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Kelpan, that is a Super Cute Little Puppy, but it doesn't resemble the other two. (Okay, maybe they aren't identical either, but that's what lipo and a haircut does to you.) --Greenvegetable 03:53, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

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