Talk:The Black And White Man

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Adopting an article, Modus? Seems you liked it. -- herr doktor needsAscalpel Rocket [scream!] 03:11, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

I still haven't decided. I'm mostly just going over the text with a fine-toothed keyboard. Also, I mix metaphors sometimes. --Sir Modusoperandi Boinc! 03:27, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
I don't have any idea if this article is polemical or just too weird or unfunny. Anyway, your help is appreciated. -- herr doktor needsAscalpel Rocket [scream!] 03:29, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
No problem. I've been speaking english all my life, and I still don't use it real gooder. --Sir Modusoperandi Boinc! 03:31, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
About my English, I feel that I'm almost there - with several consecutive edits, a spellchecker at hand and constant self-patrolling. But don't ask me about my accent, hehehe. -- herr doktor needsAscalpel Rocket [scream!] 03:35, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

New Uncyc-specific superhero. Before someone raising complains about Blacky's power being stupid - well, nobody is perfect. It's his handicap. -- herr doktor needsAscalpel Rocket [scream!] 01:23, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Very nice. Marshal Uncyclopedian! Talk to me! 01:33, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Oh, man, you were quite quick! I've added a new picture. Care to look again? -- herr doktor needsAscalpel Rocket [scream!] 01:39, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
Humour: 11 Great. Very funny.
Concept: 8 Ethnic superhero is an interesting concept.
Prose and formatting: 7 Prose is great, formatting is good
Images: 7 The new image is much better than the rest. Great!
Miscellaneous: 6 Lists were well used.
Final Score: 39 Great!
Reviewer: Marshal Uncyclopedian! Talk to me! 01:45, 27 April 2007 (UTC)


edit From VFH

  • More content coming soon. -- herr doktor needsAscalpel Rocket [scream!] 20:14, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
  • Abstain from voting. Read it in great detail and cleaned up a few spelling bits and bobs but feel kinda neutral on this one. I really just like seeing my signature everywhere. Ceridwyntalk contribs arc2.0 01:51, 05 May 2007
    • I'm having some difficulties with this one, despite having enormous faith in the idea since its conception. Maybe I've created a cult article, who knows? -- herr doktor needsAscalpel Rocket [scream!] 02:05, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
      • The idea is definately there, but I think the constant referral to him as 'them' or 'they' detracts somewhat from it. I know he has split personalities, but it would be funnier (imo anyway) if he was referred to as only one entity. Clearly you've put in a lot of work, and definately gains points for length but there is something to be said for short and snappy. As they say, size isn't everything, its what you do with it that counts.Ceridwyntalk contribs arc2.0 02:11, 05 May 2007

On Prettiestpretty vote:

  • Actually, I didn't know about this Pandaman (can you link me?). So it's coincidence, not plagiarism. By the way, the split body is is quite an obvious idea, that already appeared in several different characters (the Capcom boss in Street Fighter 3, for instance). My merit, if I have one, is turning this into a modest satire of racism and racial relationships. -- herr doktor needsAscalpel Rocket [scream!] 21:20, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
One piece? But that guy has a single body color. -- herr doktor needsAscalpel Rocket [scream!] 21:28, 5 May 2007 (UTC)

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