Talk:The 23 Enigma

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Here it is. My crescendo. Well at least for now. I guess every new article I write, I consider it my best. Does that mean none of my articles will ever be the best?

Nothing makes sense anymore. I'm cold and lonely.

--Hell0ihateyou 00:42, 19 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 9 I was cracking up the entire time!
Concept: 8 Solid concept as it mixes in several of the ideas of the number 23 and other conspiracy movies.
Prose and formatting: 5 The writing of the script summary seems a bit clogged or soemthing like that
Images: 8.8 Great images.
Miscellaneous: 5.23 The number 23 is everywhere!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhhh!!!!!!!1!!!23!!!!!!!1!!!!!
Final Score: 36.03 This is a really solid piece of work, I'd say fix some grammar mistakes and fix up the movie sumamry to make it neater and you're all set! Don't change the content just how it's presented.
Reviewer: --Dr. Fenwick 20:55, 21 May 2007 (UTC)


edit From Pee

I think this is my best stuff yet. Hope you do too.

Humour: 8 I found it very funny espicially after I scroll over the links, but I think other people may believe it is to random at parts. You may want to do something about that.
Concept: 8 Great spin on The DaVinci Code. Great idea.
Prose and formatting: 8 I don't see any major formatting or prose issues, but it could be expanded upon some more.
Images: 7 While the pictures themselves aren't very funny, their captions had me laughing like a hyena.
Miscellaneous: 6 I'd take out a few a coincidences. Many people on this site don't like long lists (I do) so yeah... Other than that and expanding upon the start some, I don't think much else can really be done.
Final Score: 37 I just got an idea! You may want to turn "The 23 Enigma(film)" into its own article, with a smaller mention on the main article. Just an idea.
Reviewer: --Dexter111344 23:28, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
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