Talk:That Television Show With Blinking Lights Where People Talk Really Loudly!!!

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My latest article after a somewhat severe bout of Writer's Block. It's not completely finished at the moment, but I'll be adding bits and pieces and pictures to it over the next few days. And yes, I know it isn't properly formatted and doesn't have wikilinks or whatever. I add those last. I'm just looking at a good, honest review of the content. I don't see this article becoming too much longer as I think I've about stretched the idea to its limit, I just want some feedback. Thanks. --Sir ENeGMA (talk) GUN WotM PLS 02:11, 13 February 2007 (UTC)

Bump. --Sir ENeGMA (talk) GUN WotM PLS 03:22, 15 February 2007 (UTC)
Humour: 7 Nice mix of randomness and trueness in there.
Concept: 8 Nice broad subject, you can take the piss out of just about any advert, game show, or other programme.
Prose and formatting: 6 Nothing wrong with it, but not terribly interesting. As you say, not finished yet
Images: 7 The ones you've got are good, but you could easily add another.
Miscellaneous: 7 ...
Final Score: 35 Pretty good; you could probably exploit the game show line more, and I'm surprised you haven't homed in on the kids' toys adverts more but reads fine as it is. Needs polished up still.
Reviewer: --Kelpan 17:07, 28 February 2007 (UTC)
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