Talk:Suspense

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I love it! Don't change a thing... and let's hope some people notice this. This could be big. --Andorin Kato 05:10, 31 December 2006 (UTC)

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Found this stashed in a lonely corner somewhere... it could have potential, methinks. What youthinks? --Andorin Kato 23:50, 1 January 2007 (UTC)

Heh, that made me giggle actually... but one-joke pages are likely to get huffed or tagged as stubs fairly quickly. You could try linking on the page to a sub-page (like Suspense/Rest of article) which could then be a proper-length article without diminishing the effect of the initial joke. --Sir Jam 11:12, 2 January 2007 (UTC)

Humor

5/10 - Not a lot to be said here. Not "ha-ha" or "lol" funny so much as "Oh, I get it" funny.

Concept

1/10 - Gimmicky, and the concept could be reworked to permit a full article.

Formatting and Prose

N/A - Well, there isn't much to be said here. There's a very clear absence of formatting and prose.

Images

0/10 - Obviously, there's no image. Although you could go on very well without one, I'd say add one, either a very mysterious lurking shadow or someone screaming, again in a shadow. Or it could just go naked.

Final Opinion

6/40 - Simply said, it's a gimmick.

Comments

I would like to see this made into a full article, if possible, but using the same basic concept. Maybe it begins like this, goes on like Do NOT click any links! for a while, and finally reaches a subpage full article. -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 00:35, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

Humor

3/10 - Hmmm... I accept the existence of one-joke articles.

Concept

1/10 - One-joke article.

Formatting and Prose

0/10 - One-joke article.

Images

0/10 - One... did I say this before?

Final Opinion

3/50 - Euroipods is people!

Comments

As stated above by Jam, a good suggestion to expand this gimmick to something worthing being called an article is creating a page with the article itself. This could be hidden somewhat to make it more "mysterious" -- herr doktor needsApistol Rocket [scream!] 00:43, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

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