Talk:Sperm

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edit '''''From Pee Review'''''

Just wrote this and I haven't written any article for, hmm, three months, maybe. So any feedback would be appreciated. Cheers! It's gneomI 13:57, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 9 Very funny, well written, probably could be improven with a few expansions... but I'm not sure if that's totally necessary.
Concept: 10 Laugh out loud!
Prose and formatting: 10 Might be a few spelling mistakes I didn't notice, but grammar and formatting is sound as a pound.
Images: 10 Very appropriate images... good mix of high-quality and low-quality images.
Miscellaneous: 9 Made me laugh that's for sure
Final Score: 48
Reviewer: -- Prof. Olipro Icons-flag-gb KUN (W)Anchor Op Bur. (Harass) 14:03, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
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