# Talk:Soap Operas

## edit From Pee Review

Hi this is my first thing...I think I need help The preceding unsigned comment was added by Luck (talk • contribs)

 Humour: 6 Not bad for a first! Concept: 8 Much better than Soap Opera, but should probably be merged. Prose and formatting: 6 The choppier sentences are funny, but the overall prose could use some touchings up. Images: 0 No Pics. Miscellaneous: 9 Many people use the $math$ very poorly, but this usage was funny. Final Score: 29 A worthy first outing. Since you think you need help, I've add it to my Adoptions list. Reviewer: THINKER 06:48, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Ok, I like this idea and you've got some really good bit's here so I'm gonna help out, by re writing it, although I will keep your math bit as Thinker said it's really good.--orian57 00:36, 10 March 2008 (UTC)