Talk:San Marino

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Some time ago I wrote half an essay on San Marino´s plans to achieve global domination. I posted part of it here, just for good measure. It doesn´t really fit into the rest of the article, but I didn´t want to screw up the brilliant work that had already been done. -General Appo 17.49 9/12/08 or maybe 12/9/08, or 08/12/9, or 08/9/12, or 12/08/09, or 9/08/12, or maybe just 12th September 2008. Don´t know really.

I rewrote the article despite its long history...if I'm fucking anything up, let me know.--Imp88 13:33, 27 January 2007 (UTC)

I tried to insert a sentence:"Half of of the houses in the fricking rebublic are currently used as fricking foreign embassies.", but couldn't find a proper place. The article is so fricking neat and compact it should be featured. Guutog 05:45, 23 April 2007 (UTC)

edit Formatting

There seems to be an error in the country infobox. can someone help?--Imp88 14:19, 27 January 2007 (UTC)

I've fixed the infobox, the parameters were not correct. If you wanted to know what I did to fix this you could probably find out by checking the history. —Braydie at 00:24, 28 January 2007 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

I'm mostly done with this article, I just need a review and a little help with the template. --Imp88 23:23, 27 January 2007 (UTC)

never mind then. Thanks, I guess. --Imp88 11:28, 9 February 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 It's pretty funny, but not hilarious I would say. A lot of the humor seems to be based on the repetition of "frickin" etc. which IS funny, just not a lot of variety there. The stuff in the sidebar definitely adds to the humor. So it's above average, but not exceptional. Definitely funnier than the old version of the article.
Concept: 8 I suppose it's pretty hard to make fun of an obscure country like San Marino, and the way the article is designed is definitely clever.
Prose and formatting: 7 I like the division into sections, the formatting, the sidebar layout etc. It's a bit short so perhaps there are too many sections, but it's not something really bothersome. The prose is written as an intentional rant of sorts, but there are a lot of words/phrases that are repeated which makes it sort of "tired" after a while.
Images: 5 Only 1 image, so not much to comment on. The image itself isn't exceptional, but the caption is great. The little images in the sidebar are ok.
Miscellaneous: 7 I was initially expecting something bad out of this article, but it was a nice quick read and relatively funny.
Final Score: 33 Maybe I'll go visit San Marino now.
Reviewer: --Composure1 01:44, 10 February 2007 (UTC)
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