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I'd like to cut a couple sections of this article out to make it a bit easier to read. I already did most of what I plan to do, so if no one minds I'd like to put up my changes. I got rid of 5 or 6 of the small sections and split the first one up, so there's 11 sections in my version. I also toyed with the wording of some sentences and the associated titles. So, any objections? Roastpork 07:34, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Perhaps instead of slashing out the smaller sections, they could best be consolidated by subject matter (for example, a history section, a usage section, an "unbridled enthusiasm" section, etc). On the other hand the "Please pass on the salt" stuff seems to be woefully lacking of funny, and could do with a major overhaul and/or trim-down. Anyhoo, feel free to salvage whatever you can of this mess. --DW III CUNOUN 22:37, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
Okay, I'll work on what I have a bit more and see if I can help anything. Thanks. Roastpork 03:13, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
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