Talk:Rod Blagojevich

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This article was nominated for deletion on February 15, 2009.
The result of the discussion was Keep.

edit Way to much facts

Giusep nay will intern this article if you don't find a way to make it less factual.Saberwolf116 04:08, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

edit Ok

I steamrolled the article, changed the concept. What does everyone think?Saberwolf116 03:04, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

Humour: 9 Very funny. You seem particularly good with the links. Original content and everything. Just not quite as funny as it could be. Maybe you could use more of Blago's own words, that was good too.
Concept: 10 Rod Blagojevich selling the reader Obama's senate seat. Political corruption, bribes, violence, Chicago politics is just wonderful subject matter.
Prose and formatting: 8 Just a few capitalization/homonym issues, and you'll be fine. Also, the section "Are you bribing me?" is mislabeled. He isn't trying to bribe the reader--he's trying to get the reader to bribe him.
Images: 6 One image is never enough. And that one you have is kind of pitiful. Try to get one where he at least looks angry or sleazy. Heck, you could probably use a photoshopped picture of some kind.
Miscellaneous: 7 Needs more expansion. Much too short. Well-written, but short. The dialog format is good. Maybe you could have the reader get drawn in a little bit more, be kind of interested at first. Maybe collect some evidence too, just to give Blago more of a motive
Final Score: 40 Good article, great foundation, needs more content.
Reviewer: User:Aethix/sig 01:28, 30 March 2009 (UTC)
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