Talk:Regenerating meatloaf

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I'd sell my Mum for some, if I liked meatloaf. Good stuff. -- Hindleyite Converse 20:36, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

Wow, thanks! It still needs work though... --Wehpudicontok--Welcome to Vaporstory! 21:21, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

Hi! I see you used my meatloafium idea. Tis the awesome, no? Yehp

Yehp, Yehp, that was good. It's great so far. I need to finish the history section, though; Dr. Somethingorother is totally a filler. Any ideas? Also, how is your picture coming? No one here seems to want to make bad pictures of old meatloaf. --Wehpudicontok--Welcome to Vaporstory! 21:59, 24 January 2007 (UTC)
I made a crude drawing in Paint that works for now, but it'd be much better with something out of Photoshop. --Wehpudicontok--Welcome to Vaporstory! 02:47, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

I'm working on the photoshop, i might have an idea for the name of the good doctor. I'm also still working on that so.... hope for the best, sorry I'm taking so long, I'm caught up in school work.-Yehp

It's alright; so am I. --Wehpudicontok--Welcome to Vaporstory! 01:28, 3 February 2007 (UTC)
New picture. Nothing coming on the core, though? That's the one that'll sell this sucker. --Wehpudicontok--Welcome to Vaporstory! 03:32, 6 February 2007 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

This is my first entry in Pee Review. I've been working on this idea for a while; what does the community think? --Wehpudicontok--Welcome to Vaporstory! 03:32, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 I love the sober tone. Keep on it, whatever new ideas you get.
Concept: 9 Indeed a great concept. You may expand it with some "controversies", "protests" (from the well known hippies, the same that loath transgenics)
Prose and formatting: 7 A little more malice would do good. Offend someone. The hippies I've mentioned above, for instance.
Images: 4 Hmmm... you really need some pics there. Add them according to your history. What about the mad scientist and a more realistic view of the regen meatloaf?
Miscellaneous: 8 A very nice start, kid. As I stated before, just add some more 'emotion'. Controversies and bizarre stuff. What happens when one eats a whole r.m.?
Final Score: 35 My compliments! Now get back to the job.
Reviewer: herr doktor needsApistol Rocket [scream!] 03:58, 1 February 2007 (UTC)


Thanks for the review! I'll see what I can do about pictures... probably not much though... --Wehpudicontok--Welcome to Vaporstory! 01:49, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

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