Talk:Physical education

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I think the weakest parts of this article are the lead and third caption. Does the unencyclopedic tone help or hinder the article?

This urinal is open. Alksubsig.gifAlksub - VFH CM WA RV {talk} 21:08, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 I smiled and chuckled, but there was no LOL moments. Closest to it was the 200 Push-Ups
Concept: 5 Physical education isn't like Lord of the Flies anymore. Concept is a tad dated, but funny.
Prose and formatting: 7.5 The unencyclopedic tone definitely helps the article.
Images: 7 No comment
Miscellaneous: 5 I would add something about over-exertion and death and a coverup by the teacher as something else.
Final Score: 30.5 Funny article that could use some genuine belly laughs. Sorry, but I don't know how to illicit them. Maybe a section from the nerds' point of view? Cheers!
Reviewer: Ljlego 03:00, 3 March 2007 (UTC)
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