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If anyone else wants to write this with me, have at it. Central concepts pretty much right there in the intro. --07:35, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
- Jk I'm almost done, thanks for helping out nobody. -- 11:45, May 12, 2011 (UTC)
|Humour:||8||It will be a pleasure to do this since it has been sitting here for so long lol. First of all, I have to say I don't know at all who Peter Dinklage is or if he exists only in your imagination, so bear in mind you have the opinion of a Peter Dinklage n00b. UPDATE!: I just saw on Wikipedia that he exist, but I didn't read anything. I put some suggestions in to the best of my abilities, I hope it sparks ideas, although there isn't that much since it's hard to improve a good article, I'm pretty sure this is why it sit on Pee Review for so long!
It kinda gives the childish tone the article has throughout, I like the kind of juvenile excitement, however, it could use another joke or 2, something only 9 year olds do for exemple, I don't know, like " Yesterday, when I was washing my trucks in my miniature garage, I realized I'M FAMOUS!" I can't really give an opinion on the Jordan Prentice joke because I don't know who it is, living in a backward country as I do! :) It may be funny to those who know him.
Straight "E's LOL, Here again I don't know about Jordan Prentice but it is funny nonetheless. Maybe there: "mean sometimes though, since they call me mean names", 2 "means are really close toether, think about another childish synonym. The whole pragraph is OK, and I really can't think of a suggestion there. In the my parents thing, "spending" could become "wasting in useful ways" lol
Then again, it's all good. I just have a small problem with " She made me apologize to him but he never showed up to school on Monday" Shouldn't it be "She wanted me to... so on? I mean, since he never saw him again?
Weak suggestion there: "I've done everything from playing a dwarf (which is like a small man who holds a big sword) to a midget (which is like a dwarf without a sword) to a hobbit (which is like a midget with a ring.)
The elf thing is ridiculously funny.
"really bad apple juice" LMAO
LOL, once again I feel cheap for not whining.
|Concept:||8.5||Good concept lol, this midget guy is hilarious and the fact that the tone is so childish is awesome! It reminds be a little bit of the infamous Lollipop tone, but with one actually doing it on purpose! Seriously, it was hard for me to suggest stuff to improve there, I almost gave up. It's kinda hard for me to put an objective score on this because I don't know him, though it seems to be a great concept since that actor has a lot of potential for being a great lulz subject. You seem to like him, could I be right? It's great, because a lot of people on here seem to think it is necessary to bash someone in order to be funny. Skillful writers can make an encensing article,|
|Prose and formatting:||9||As always with your articles, the prose is top-notch, I could not find a single typo. On the formatting side, it's nice when you put 2 pics of the same size together like you did at the end, although I don't really like the one on the right. (see below)|
|Images:||8||In general, I like the pictures.
|Final Score:||42||Well, if you nom this one and it doesn,t make it, then I'll know I have no taste lol. As you sure can see, I had a really hard time finding things to improve, really. It's not easy doing Pee Reviews of good articles, I hope that helped to an extent! There's always my TP to come screaming at me LOL!|
|Reviewer:||Mattsnow 15:18, August 9, 2011 (UTC)|