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This is the talk page for discussing improvements to the Pen Island article.
The Man Of Led 22:13, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
edit From Pee Review
This is only my second article, and also my second entry to the Pee Review, so please
have mercy take no prisoners!!
|Humour:||5||It's the kind of humor that I like in moderated doses, but is not appreciated by many uncyclopedians. A bit random and a bit pubescent.|
|Concept:||7||It is a little off in left-field, but it was a good pun.|
|Prose and formatting:||5||Pretty solid. The templates could be better, there could also be some charts about Pen Island.|
|Images:||7||The images were a little sloopy, but they flowed about right.|
|Final Score:||29||Pretty good for a second article. B-.|
|Reviewer:||Happy Weasel 21:29, 22 April 2007 (UTC)|
edit From Pee Review 2
Reviewed here once, improved it, what hits and what misses? Methinks "writing and stuff" needs....improvement?
|Humour:||9||Very well executed!|
|Concept:||4||pfrt. I was surprised someone hadn't done it already.|
|Prose and formatting:||8||Well written... a lil too much PENIS|
|Images:||7||I really like that pen/sword one. Others are consistent|
|Miscellaneous:||6.5||Oscar Wilde section got a mild laugh|
|Final Score:||34.5||Worthy of praise!|
|Reviewer:||--MrMetalFLower 17:42, 15 May 2007 (UTC)|