Talk:Pen Island

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The Man Of Led 22:13, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

This is only my second article, and also my second entry to the Pee Review, so please have mercy take no prisoners!!

Humour: 5 It's the kind of humor that I like in moderated doses, but is not appreciated by many uncyclopedians. A bit random and a bit pubescent.
Concept: 7 It is a little off in left-field, but it was a good pun.
Prose and formatting: 5 Pretty solid. The templates could be better, there could also be some charts about Pen Island.
Images: 7 The images were a little sloopy, but they flowed about right.
Miscellaneous: 5
Final Score: 29 Pretty good for a second article. B-.
Reviewer: Happy Weasel 21:29, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review 2

edit Pen Island

Reviewed here once, improved it, what hits and what misses? Methinks "writing and stuff" needs....improvement?

Humour: 9 Very well executed!
Concept: 4 pfrt. I was surprised someone hadn't done it already.
Prose and formatting: 8 Well written... a lil too much PENIS
Images: 7 I really like that pen/sword one. Others are consistent
Miscellaneous: 6.5 Oscar Wilde section got a mild laugh
Final Score: 34.5 Worthy of praise!
Reviewer: --MrMetalFLower 17:42, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
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