Talk:Pathological liar

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Just finished a massive rewrite on this article, adding pictures and about three times the content. Also, if somebody could provide a larger version of the first pic I have on the page (w/ Jon Lovitz), I'd appreciate it. --Mr.Vib 14:17, 22 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 10 I laughed all the way through! Nice job
Concept: 9 A little long, but it's okay
Prose and formatting: 9 Good use of cross-outs, (and honestly, I still don't know what prose stands for)
Images: 5 Pictures suck. Add some. Those out there aren't that good
Miscellaneous: 8 Link heavy
Final Score: 41 Nice article! Remove a few links, add some pictures, and this will much better than the vast majority of gay-joke articles on this site
Reviewer: Fresh Stain Serq Fet of Pokemon (At your service)
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