Talk:Oregon State University
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This is quite possibly the funniest college article on this site, i want anyone to prove that is it isn't...--04:46, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
|Humour:||4||Pretty unsophisticated and shallow.|
|Concept:||7||Well, it's a notable American college. We should have an article on it.|
|Prose and formatting:||4||Prose is mostly readable but not well-formed.|
|Images:||7||Appropriate pictures. But none of the campus, for instance.|
|Miscellaneous:||5||I feel lukewarm about this article. It's not something I would have read all the way through if I had not been reviewing it.|
|Reviewer:||----OEJ 14:57, 28 May 2007 (UTC)|
Here's my personal reaction: OK, imagine a college specializing in sex ed... OK, it's a nice male wet dream, but where are the jokes?
Have a look at this:
- For example, in 2006 Ben Dover Beaver bent over a Southern California cheerleader and fucked her in the pussy while telling the camera ”I’m feeding her beaver some of my sausage", this was broadcast live on KBVR-TV.
How is that funny? Well, I guess an 11-year-old boy would think that simply typing the words "fucked" and "pussy" and "beaver" and "sausage" is screamingly funny. But you see, many readers are going to be looking for actual jokes. They will expect reasonably sophisticated satire, witty passages, clever puns, and other entertainment. Most readers are not going to be 11-year-old boys.
If I were to revise this piece -- I live in Oregon, and some of my relatives graduated from OSU -- then I would satirize many aspects of the college and its student body and environment. I would draw some satirical portraits of notable faculty (not just list a few of them with a ten-word non-sentence behind their names), poke some fun at the institution, its history, its campus. I would not make one thing -- male-viewpoint sex -- the focus of everything.
Whatever. The piece as it stands obviously appeals to some people, so it may be that it's simply not to my taste. ----OEJ 14:57, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
|Humour:||5||Needs some sand paper little ruff. But more sex jokes mainly beaver related.
Mabye something on masters courses. I can't belive their isn't one for baiting
|Concept:||7||realism is good, but the top is dry of humor looks to wikipedia|
|Prose and formatting:||5||needs cleaning|
|Images:||10||playboy nuff said no wait HOOTERS now nuff said|
|Final Score:||37||might be the funniest colledge article But that ain't saying much for the rest|
|Reviewer:||--5go 04:12, 28 May 2007 (UTC)|