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edit From Pee Review

Humour: 7.5 Made me chuckle a good bit. Nice stuff.
Concept: 9 Great concept, I love the idea of all of them being creatures.
Prose and formatting: 6.5 A little too much plain text, and unnecessarily formatted in places. Eg. the intro; while it's funny, the fact that it is plain text with nothing bold or itallic and barely anything linked to makes it less fun to read. Some text is bold for no reason and grammar could be better.
Images: 6.5 The image is good, but it doesn't seem to tie in with the concept of OMGs being creatures. And it could probably do with another one.
Miscellaneous: 6 Too much pointless quotes in the wrong places; they should be moved and improved. I like the vote box but it's a bit random, but there is no description of why it is there. It begs the question: why?
Final Score: 35.5 A good article with a lot of potential but let down by formatting.
Reviewer: Atomik Spongeface 21:31, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
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