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Thank you so much for creating this page. I once made an article entitled Panzer Divisions of WW2 and wanted to link Normandy. It came up as a red link and I was quite suprised. Someone had made a page on Brittany but no one had done one on Normandy. Good luck with finishing it. Sir ScottPat Icons-flag-gb Scotland Flag 1 UnS CUN VFH (talk) 17:59, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

Thank you! I'll try to finish this page as soon as possible. Anton199 (talk) 08:49, April 6, 2013 (UTC)

Hang on, where's the original Francois Hollande quote gone. That was good. Sir ScottPat Icons-flag-gb Scotland Flag 1 UnS CUN VFH (talk) 14:22, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

You mean the first one? I can make it a Nicolas Sarkozy quote. Anton199 (talk) 05:21, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

I like what you've done with the Sarkozy and Hollande quotes however make Hollande sound really suprised: "Normandy! A country! You wish." This make Hollande sound like he immediatly disagrees with it so it is funnier. Sir ScottPat Icons-flag-gb Scotland Flag 1 UnS CUN VFH (talk) 05:39, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

edit Review by ScottPat

Anton (talk) 08:51, May 7, 2013 (UTC)

Humour: 8 I liked the humour personally but others may not understand it all. The cuisine is great and the fact that France doesn't want Normandy to become independent. To improve you could try repeating the Normandy independence joke more and making up a Norman terrorist group. It gets at the French which is what us Brits like to see. the Joan of Arc joke is funny.
Concept: 7 Brilliant in terms of what is there. it is funny and you know your stuff but there isn't enough of it. I want to laugh more about Normandy. I think you have explored the French dislike of Normandy well and the Normans crave for independence however I think more about Normandy and England is needed. More on D-Day perhaps as well. remember how much we wrote on the Ukraine article.
Prose and formatting: 8 Quite a few grammar mistakes still. get it proofread by User:Reverend P. Pennyfeather but nicely laid out. I like how it looks encyclopedic. good use of infobox for country.
Images: 9 Amazing images. Some of the best I've ever seen. Top quality. The alien one is very funny. You are very good with selecting the right images Anton.
Miscellaneous: 8.3 Average Score
Final Score: 40.3 Great work for a first article. If you added more to it perhaps it could be good enough for a feature. More jokes about the Norman culture and people required though.
Reviewer: Sir ScottPat (talk) White Ensign Scotland Flag 1 Compassrose VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 15:59, May 8, 2013 (UTC)

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Have given it a read through. I have also changed the Joan d'Arc quote, feel free to revert. Sir Reverend P. Pennyfeather (fancy a chat?) CUN VFH PLS 20:30, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

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