Talk:Neil Armstrong

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This article was nominated for deletion on May 4, 2009.
The result of the discussion was Keep.

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I think this is a fairly decent, workmanlike article; I just think it's missing something. Any ideas? --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 09:23, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 4 It's just not funny enough. Jokes are few and far between while fictitious history isn't terribly funny
Concept: 7 I like the idea of him being an actor starring in the moon landing hoax, but you need to take that further
Prose and formatting: 6 Nothing really wrong with it.
Images: 3 Not doing anything for me
Miscellaneous: 5 Don't want it feeling left out
Final Score: 25 "workmanlike" says it all. Comedy and workmanlike don't go. If you can't think of something funny to write don't fill in the rest of the article with boring fiction: It'll just make people miss the good bits
Reviewer: --Kelpan 23:04, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
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