Talk:Muiderberg

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hello,

my article has been marked as ugly and I can't seem to find out why can anybody give me some help on how to make the article accepteble?--I-max 10:46, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

edit Review

Humour: 6 I liked the Hollish Muidenbergian quote - great idea. I'd leave out the Oscar Wilde quote - they're overdone. It would be funnier if each idea were expanded upon; the article rambles too quickly from idea to idea. In some cases, I'm not sure what you mean (maybe Holland humour I don't get?) - for example, I want to know more about the subcultures (you mean the culture of the buried people I guess? Say more about this). Mainly the low score is because it needs expanding.
Concept: 9 I really like the idea. A town with the big tourist attraction its hoarde of gravestones, and with some kind of strange subculture. If there is some connection to the actual town, it might help.
Prose and formatting: 5 The reason it was tagged ugly is probably because of all the red links. Re-work these to lead to actual links. You can keep the wording you like but link to actual articles by putting "real article vertical slash your wording" in square quotes. Also a few spelling errors.
Images: 7 The children's drawing really adds to the concept. Maybe more photos if you expand the article.
Miscellaneous: 7 Again, expansion of the ideas so people get the humour more I think would be helpful. Maybe tell us about some of the people buried there.
Final Score: 34 Any questions, leave them on my talk page. Roger.
Reviewer: Rogpyvbc 22:39, 10 April 2007 (UTC)


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